Telechat Review of draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis-01
review-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis-01-opsdir-telechat-jiang-2018-01-08-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 03)
Type Telechat Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2018-01-09
Requested 2017-12-19
Other Reviews Yangdoctors Early review of -01 by Mahesh Jethanandani (diff)
Rtgdir Telechat review of -01 by Joel Halpern (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Sheng Jiang
Review review-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis-01-opsdir-telechat-jiang-2018-01-08
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/GY0pTP3BA-aFq7FSf6GXpoUfyTw
Reviewed rev. 01 (document currently at 03)
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2018-01-08
Review completed: 2018-01-08

Review
review-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis-01-opsdir-telechat-jiang-2018-01-08

Hi, OPS-DIR, Authors,
 
I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
 
This Standards Track document defines a YANG data model for management of IP implementations.  It includes configuration and system  state.  This document obsoletes RFC 7277. As a Bis document, this document is well written. It is ready with minor issues.
 
Major issue: no.
 
Minor issue: no.

Regards,

Sheng