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Telechat Review of draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis-01
review-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis-01-opsdir-telechat-jiang-2018-01-08-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 03)
Type Telechat Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2018-01-09
Requested 2017-12-19
Authors Martin Björklund
Draft last updated 2018-01-08
Completed reviews Yangdoctors Early review of -01 by Mahesh Jethanandani (diff)
Rtgdir Telechat review of -01 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -01 by Sheng Jiang (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Sheng Jiang
State Completed
Review review-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis-01-opsdir-telechat-jiang-2018-01-08
Reviewed revision 01 (document currently at 03)
Result Ready
Completed 2018-01-08
review-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis-01-opsdir-telechat-jiang-2018-01-08-00
Hi, OPS-DIR, Authors,

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments
were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF
drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD
reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

This Standards Track document defines a YANG data model for management of IP
implementations.  It includes configuration and system  state.  This document
obsoletes RFC 7277. As a Bis document, this document is well written. It is
ready with minor issues.

Major issue: no.

Minor issue: no.

Regards,

Sheng