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Telechat Review of draft-ietf-netmod-schema-mount-11
review-ietf-netmod-schema-mount-11-genart-telechat-halpern-2018-10-03-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-netmod-schema-mount
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 12)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-10-09
Requested 2018-10-01
Authors Martin Björklund , Ladislav Lhotka
Draft last updated 2018-10-03
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -10 by Shawn M Emery (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -10 by Mehmet Ersue (diff)
Rtgdir Telechat review of -10 by Matthew Bocci (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -10 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -11 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Joel M. Halpern
State Completed
Review review-ietf-netmod-schema-mount-11-genart-telechat-halpern-2018-10-03
Reviewed revision 11 (document currently at 12)
Result Ready with Issues
Completed 2018-10-03
review-ietf-netmod-schema-mount-11-genart-telechat-halpern-2018-10-03-00
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Document: draft-ietf-netmod-schema-mount-??
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2018-10-03
IETF LC End Date: 2018-06-29
IESG Telechat date: 2018-10-11

Summary: This document seems to meet the specific requirements for publication
as a proposed standard.

Major issues:
    It is still this reviewer's opinion that for a reader who has not been
    involved in the discussion in the working group, the document is quite
    unclear and confusing.   For somewhat more details, please see my previous
    review at
    https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-netmod-schema-mount-10-genart-lc-halpern-2018-06-28/

Minor issues:
    N/A

Nits/editorial comments:
    N/A