Telechat Review of draft-ietf-netmod-schema-mount-11
review-ietf-netmod-schema-mount-11-genart-telechat-halpern-2018-10-03-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-netmod-schema-mount |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 12) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2018-10-09 | |
| Requested | 2018-10-01 | |
| Authors | Martin Björklund , Ladislav Lhotka | |
| Draft last updated | 2018-10-03 | |
| Completed reviews |
Secdir Last Call review of -10
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Shawn M Emery
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Opsdir Last Call review of -10 by Mehmet Ersue (diff) Rtgdir Telechat review of -10 by Matthew Bocci (diff) Genart Last Call review of -10 by Joel M. Halpern (diff) Genart Telechat review of -11 by Joel M. Halpern (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Joel M. Halpern |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-netmod-schema-mount-11-genart-telechat-halpern-2018-10-03
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| Reviewed revision | 11 (document currently at 12) | |
| Result | Ready with Issues | |
| Completed | 2018-10-03 |
review-ietf-netmod-schema-mount-11-genart-telechat-halpern-2018-10-03-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-netmod-schema-mount-?? Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review Date: 2018-10-03 IETF LC End Date: 2018-06-29 IESG Telechat date: 2018-10-11 Summary: This document seems to meet the specific requirements for publication as a proposed standard. Major issues: It is still this reviewer's opinion that for a reader who has not been involved in the discussion in the working group, the document is quite unclear and confusing. For somewhat more details, please see my previous review at https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-netmod-schema-mount-10-genart-lc-halpern-2018-06-28/ Minor issues: N/A Nits/editorial comments: N/A