Last Call Review of draft-ietf-netmod-syslog-model-21

Request Review of draft-ietf-netmod-syslog-model
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 26)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2018-02-28
Requested 2018-02-14
Authors Clyde Wildes, Kiran Koushik
Draft last updated 2018-03-26
Completed reviews Yangdoctors Last Call review of -17 by Kent Watsen (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -21 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -21 by Yaron Sheffer (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -21 by Ron Bonica (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Ron Bonica 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-netmod-syslog-model-21-opsdir-lc-bonica-2018-03-26
Reviewed rev. 21 (document currently at 26)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2018-03-26



I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

Summary: Ready for publication

The document is well written  and well considered. If I were on the IESG, I would give it a YES

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** The abstract seems to contain references
     ([I-D.ietf-netmod-revised-datastores]), which it shouldn't.  Please
     replace those with straight textual mentions of the documents in question.

  == Unused Reference: 'I-D.ietf-netmod-revised-datastores' is defined on
     line 1407, but no explicit reference was found in the text

  == Outdated reference: A later version (-06) exists of