Last Call Review of draft-ietf-netmod-syslog-model-21
review-ietf-netmod-syslog-model-21-opsdir-lc-bonica-2018-03-26-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-netmod-syslog-model
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 32)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2018-02-28
Requested 2018-02-14
Authors Joe Clarke , Mahesh Jethanandani , Clyde Wildes , Kiran Koushik
I-D last updated 2018-03-26
Completed reviews Yangdoctors Last Call review of -17 by Kent Watsen (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -21 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -21 by Yaron Sheffer (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -21 by Ron Bonica (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Ron Bonica
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-netmod-syslog-model by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 21 (document currently at 32)
Result Ready
Completed 2018-03-26
review-ietf-netmod-syslog-model-21-opsdir-lc-bonica-2018-03-26-00
Folks,

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of
the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included
in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should
treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

Summary: Ready for publication

The document is well written  and well considered. If I were on the IESG, I
would give it a YES

Major issues:

None

Minor issues:

None

Nits:

** The abstract seems to contain references
     ([I-D.ietf-netmod-revised-datastores]), which it shouldn't.  Please
     replace those with straight textual mentions of the documents in question.

  == Unused Reference: 'I-D.ietf-netmod-revised-datastores' is defined on
     line 1407, but no explicit reference was found in the text

  == Outdated reference: A later version (-06) exists of
     draft-ietf-netmod-yang-tree-diagrams-05