Telechat Review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-federated-fs-protocol-14
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Reviewer: Peter Yee
Review Date: Nov-29-2012
IETF LC End Date: Oct-22-2012
IESG Telechat date: Nov-29-2012
Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has a nit that
should be fixed before publication. [Ready with nits.]
All other corrections from the -13 review were accepted and the other
changes in the current version appear reasonable.
Section 220.127.116.11, 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence: bracket "Section 2.8.1" in
"(see" and ")" for readability.
[This is my same suggestion from the previous review. I won't mention it
again, I promise. :-) ]