Last Call Review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-flex-files-15
review-ietf-nfsv4-flex-files-15-opsdir-lc-dunbar-2018-01-04-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-flex-files
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 19)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2018-01-16
Requested 2017-12-19
Other Reviews Genart Last Call review of -15 by Christer Holmberg (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -15 by Brian Weis (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Linda Dunbar
Review review-ietf-nfsv4-flex-files-15-opsdir-lc-dunbar-2018-01-04
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/6rmiI6fq6WMXF_XFASh4p3oPXz0
Reviewed rev. 15 (document currently at 19)
Review result Has Nits
Draft last updated 2018-01-04
Review completed: 2018-01-04

Review
review-ietf-nfsv4-flex-files-15-opsdir-lc-dunbar-2018-01-04

I think the document is written very clear. Ready to move forward, except some minor Nits. 
The document used "uids" and "gids" extensively.  I assume that "uids" = "User IDs". How about "gids"? does it mean "Group IDs"? it will be helpful to expand it at the first occurance in the document. 
In Section 2.2.2 (Examples of using uids & gids) (Page 9), why saying "owner and group are modified.."? what does the value "1066" or "1067" represent (as the value "1697" represents the UID of the user "loghyr")? 

Linda Dunbar