Telechat Review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-labreqs-04
review-ietf-nfsv4-labreqs-04-opsdir-telechat-ersue-2013-11-20-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-labreqs
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 05)
Type Telechat Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2013-11-19
Requested 2013-11-11
Authors Thomas Haynes
I-D last updated 2013-11-20
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -04 by Roni Even (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -04 by Roni Even (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Yoav Nir (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -04 by Mehmet Ersue (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Mehmet Ersue
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-nfsv4-labreqs by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 04 (document currently at 05)
Result Has nits
Completed 2013-11-20
review-ietf-nfsv4-labreqs-04-opsdir-telechat-ersue-2013-11-20-00

I reviewed the draft with the title "Requirements for Labeled NFS"
(draft-ietf-nfsv4-labreqs-04) for its operational impact.



Intended status: Informational

Current draft status: WG Document



Summary: This document describes high-level requirements for the integration of
flexible MAC functionality into the NFS v4.2.  It describes the level of
protections that should be provided over protocol components and the basic
structure of the proposed system.



::: The document is focusing mainly on requirements and is aimed to publish as
Informational. I don't see any implications from the operations and management
pov.



There are nits which need to be fixed:



** The document lacks an IANA Considerations section.

http://www.ietf.org/id-info/checklist#anchor4

says:

“

If there is no action for IANA, the section should say that, e.g., including
something like "This document has no actions for IANA."



== Outdated reference: A later version (-20) exists of
draft-ietf-nfsv4-minorversion2-19



Mehmet