Last Call Review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-layout-types-03
review-ietf-nfsv4-layout-types-03-genart-lc-shirazipour-2015-05-08-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-nfsv4-layout-types |
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| Requested rev. | no specific revision (document currently at 13) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2015-05-12 | |
| Requested | 2015-03-27 | |
| Draft last updated | 2015-05-08 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -03 by Meral Shirazipour
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Genart Telechat review of -03 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -03 by Joseph Salowey (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -03 by Menachem Dodge (diff) Genart Last Call review of -09 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Meral Shirazipour |
| State | Completed | |
| Review | review-ietf-nfsv4-layout-types-03-genart-lc-shirazipour-2015-05-08 | |
| Reviewed rev. | 03 (document currently at 13) | |
| Review result | Ready with Nits | |
| Review completed: | 2015-05-08 |
Review
review-ietf-nfsv4-layout-types-03-genart-lc-shirazipour-2015-05-08
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-nfsv4-layout-types-03 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2015-04-16 IETF LC End Date: 2015-04-16 IESG Telechat date: NA Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but it has some nits. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: -[Page 1], Abstract, "those those specifically", remove extra "those" -[Page 6], end of 3.2, "if at all possible,"--->"if at all possible." -[Page 6], section 3.3, "separably"--->"separately" - [Page 10], ref [FlexFiles] has a new version 05 now - [Page 10], ref [Lustre] is expired. Should be removed? Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com