Telechat Review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-multi-domain-fs-reqs-09
review-ietf-nfsv4-multi-domain-fs-reqs-09-genart-telechat-carpenter-2016-08-26-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-multi-domain-fs-reqs
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2016-08-30
Requested 2016-08-23
Draft last updated 2016-08-26
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -08 by Brian Carpenter (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -09 by Brian Carpenter (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Russ Housley (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -09 by Russ Housley (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Brian Carpenter
State Completed
Review review-ietf-nfsv4-multi-domain-fs-reqs-09-genart-telechat-carpenter-2016-08-26
Reviewed rev. 09 (document currently at 11)
Review result Ready with Issues
Review completed: 2016-08-26

Review
review-ietf-nfsv4-multi-domain-fs-reqs-09-genart-telechat-carpenter-2016-08-26

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Document: draft-ietf-nfsv4-multi-domain-fs-reqs-09.txt
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2016-08-26
IETF LC End Date: 2016-07-06
IESG Telechat date: 2016-09-01

Summary: Ready with issues
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Comment: After my Last Call review I expected to see a new version,
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Minor issue:
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"This document provides guidance on the deployment of..."

I understand that the AD suggested the standards track, but the document
reads more like a BCP than a Proposed Standard to me. As I read through the
document, it describes alternatives and differing scenarios.

Nits:
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  ** Downref: Normative reference to an Informational RFC: RFC 1813

This reference was added in the -09 version. I believe it should be
Informative instead of Normative.

  ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 1831 (Obsoleted by RFC 5531)

This needs to be fixed.