Last Call Review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rfc3530bis-34
review-ietf-nfsv4-rfc3530bis-34-genart-lc-davies-2014-10-06-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rfc3530bis
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 35)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2014-10-06
Requested 2014-09-25
Draft last updated 2014-10-06
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -25 by Martin Thomson (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -26 by Elwyn Davies (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -26 by Elwyn Davies (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -33 by Elwyn Davies (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -34 by Elwyn Davies (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -25 by Yoav Nir (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Elwyn Davies
State Completed
Review review-ietf-nfsv4-rfc3530bis-34-genart-lc-davies-2014-10-06
Reviewed rev. 34 (document currently at 35)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2014-10-06

Review
review-ietf-nfsv4-rfc3530bis-34-genart-lc-davies-2014-10-06

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Document: draft-ietf-nfsv4-rfc3530bis-34.txt
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 2014-12-02
IETF LC End Date: -
IESG Telechat date: 2014-12-04



Summary: I have discussed extensively with the authors and have prepared 


-35 in conjunction with them which is ready for publication as a 


Proposed Standard.






All the issues identified at last call have been fixed up in this next 


version.






Version 34 had a couple of outstanding issues, particularly 


understanding of how READDIR was intended  to operate in the face of 


modifications or deletions of the target directory between calls. Text 


has been added to s15.26.4 to clarify how servers are intended to 


operate and how clients may have to dela with this problem.






There were also a couple of editorial issues around the anonymous and 


READ bypass stateids plus some further editorial cleanup.




Major issues: None

Minor issues: READDIR behaviour clarified in -35

Nits/editorial comments: Various all fixed in -35