Last Call Review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rfc5666bis-09
review-ietf-nfsv4-rfc5666bis-09-opsdir-lc-dodge-2017-02-07-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rfc5666bis
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2017-02-07
Requested 2017-01-24
Authors Chuck Lever, William Simpson, Tom Talpey
Draft last updated 2017-02-07
Completed reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -09 by Menachem Dodge (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -09 by Ralph Droms (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -10 by Vincent Roca (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -10 by Ralph Droms (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Menachem Dodge 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-nfsv4-rfc5666bis-09-opsdir-lc-dodge-2017-02-07
Reviewed rev. 09 (document currently at 11)
Review result Has Nits
Review completed: 2017-02-07

Review
review-ietf-nfsv4-rfc5666bis-09-opsdir-lc-dodge-2017-02-07

Hello,

I reviewed the document "Remote Direct Memory Access Transport for Remote Procedure Call, Version One" (draft-ietf-nfsv4-rfc5666bis-09.txt) as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the operational area directors.
Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

Intended status: Standards Track
Current IESG state: In Last Call
IANA State: IANA Not OK


Summary: This document specifies a protocol for conveying Remote Procedure Call (RPC) messages on physical transports capable of Remote Direct Memory Access (RDMA). This document is intended to obsolete RFC 5666.

The new specification aims to clarify text, remove support for unimplemented RPC-over-RDMA Version One protocol elements, and describe current practice.

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The automatic nit tool has found the following warning:

 == Outdated reference: A later version (-06) exists of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpcrdma-bidirection-05


The document is well written.

I have no further issues.

Thank you kindly,

Menachem Dodge