Last Call Review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpcrdma-bidirection-06
review-ietf-nfsv4-rpcrdma-bidirection-06-genart-lc-shirazipour-2017-02-07-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpcrdma-bidirection |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 08) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2017-02-07 | |
Requested | 2017-01-24 | |
Authors | Chuck Lever | |
I-D last updated | 2017-02-07 | |
Completed reviews |
Opsdir Last Call review of -06
by Jouni Korhonen
(diff)
Genart Last Call review of -06 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -06 by Radia Perlman (diff) Genart Telechat review of -07 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Meral Shirazipour |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpcrdma-bidirection by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 06 (document currently at 08) | |
Result | Ready w/nits | |
Completed | 2017-02-07 |
review-ietf-nfsv4-rpcrdma-bidirection-06-genart-lc-shirazipour-2017-02-07-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpcrdma-bidirection-06 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2017-02-07 IETF LC End Date: 2017-02-07 IESG Telechat date: - Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have comments. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: -General: please consider spelling out acronyms at first use and use the acronym consistently thereafter. -[Page 6], "(ie. a "---->"(i.e., a" Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com