Last Call Review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpcrdma-bidirection-06
review-ietf-nfsv4-rpcrdma-bidirection-06-genart-lc-shirazipour-2017-02-07-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpcrdma-bidirection
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-02-07
Requested 2017-01-24
Draft last updated 2017-02-07
Completed reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Jouni Korhonen (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -06 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -06 by Radia Perlman (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -07 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
Review review-ietf-nfsv4-rpcrdma-bidirection-06-genart-lc-shirazipour-2017-02-07
Reviewed rev. 06 (document currently at 08)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2017-02-07

Review
review-ietf-nfsv4-rpcrdma-bidirection-06-genart-lc-shirazipour-2017-02-07

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
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Document: draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpcrdma-bidirection-06
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2017-02-07
IETF LC End Date:   2017-02-07
IESG Telechat date: -


Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have comments.

Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
-General: please consider spelling out acronyms at first use and use the acronym consistently thereafter.
-[Page 6], "(ie. a "---->"(i.e., a"


Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson Research
www.ericsson.com