Last Call Review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-xattrs-05
review-ietf-nfsv4-xattrs-05-genart-lc-shirazipour-2017-05-25-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-xattrs
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-05-16
Requested 2017-04-30
Authors Manoj Naik , Marc Eshel
I-D last updated 2017-05-25
Completed reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Jürgen Schönwälder (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Shawn M Emery (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -05 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-nfsv4-xattrs by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 05 (document currently at 07)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2017-05-25
review-ietf-nfsv4-xattrs-05-genart-lc-shirazipour-2017-05-25-00
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Document: draft-ietf-nfsv4-xattrs-05
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2017-05-16
IETF LC End Date: 2017-05-16
IESG Telechat date: 2017-05-25

Summary: This draft is very well written and ready to be published as Standards
Track RFC . Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
-It would have helped the reader to have the examples of xattr earlier in the
draft in the Introduction Section 1 instead of Section 2.

Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson
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