Last Call Review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-xattrs-05
review-ietf-nfsv4-xattrs-05-secdir-lc-emery-2017-05-26-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-nfsv4-xattrs |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 07) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | Security Area Directorate (secdir) | |
Deadline | 2017-05-16 | |
Requested | 2017-04-30 | |
Authors | Manoj Naik , Marc Eshel | |
I-D last updated | 2017-05-26 | |
Completed reviews |
Opsdir Last Call review of -05
by Jürgen Schönwälder
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Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Shawn M Emery (diff) Genart Last Call review of -05 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Shawn M Emery |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-nfsv4-xattrs by Security Area Directorate Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 05 (document currently at 07) | |
Result | Has nits | |
Completed | 2017-05-26 |
review-ietf-nfsv4-xattrs-05-secdir-lc-emery-2017-05-26-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. This draft discusses extensions for file attributes in the NFSv4 protocol. The security considerations section does exist and states that file attribute extensions adds no new concerns than that of file data and named attributes. It defers to the security considerations of application data in NFSv4.2 (RFC 7862), which refers to NFSv4.1 (RFC 5661). 5661 discusses possible MITM and down-grade attacks and how to mitigate them with RPCSEC_GSS (integrity or privacy services). I agree with this assertion, though I'd rather have the draft reference 5661 directly or RFC 7530. General comments: None. Editorial comments: Section 7.1: the copyright should be updated. Shawn. --