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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-nsis-ntlp-statemachine-
review-ietf-nsis-ntlp-statemachine-secdir-lc-weiler-2010-03-17-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-nsis-ntlp-statemachine
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2010-03-13
Requested 2010-03-03
Authors Tseno Tsenov , Hannes Tschofenig , Cedric Aoun , Xiaoming Fu , Elwyn B. Davies
I-D last updated 2010-03-17
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -?? by Samuel Weiler
Assignment Reviewer Samuel Weiler
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-nsis-ntlp-statemachine by Security Area Directorate Assigned
Completed 2010-03-17
review-ietf-nsis-ntlp-statemachine-secdir-lc-weiler-2010-03-17-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's 


ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the 


IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the 


security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat 


these comments just like any other last call comments.






NOTE: there's a PDF form of this draft which has easier-to-read 


pictures.  If you're going to review it in depth, use the PDF version.






This is an informational doc giving a state machine model (with 


diagrams) for GIST.  The base GIST spec was approved by the IESG in 


August.  This claims to make no changes to the protocol, just present 


the same protocol in a different form.  I see no concerns here.




-- Sam