Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ntp-checksum-trailer-04
review-ietf-ntp-checksum-trailer-04-opsdir-lc-wicinski-2016-03-08-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ntp-checksum-trailer
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2016-03-01
Requested 2016-02-18
Authors Tal Mizrahi
Draft last updated 2016-03-08
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -04 by Paul Kyzivat (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -05 by Paul Kyzivat (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Sandra Murphy (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -04 by Tim Wicinski (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Tim Wicinski
State Completed
Review review-ietf-ntp-checksum-trailer-04-opsdir-lc-wicinski-2016-03-08
Reviewed rev. 04 (document currently at 07)
Review result Has Nits
Review completed: 2016-03-08

Review
review-ietf-ntp-checksum-trailer-04-opsdir-lc-wicinski-2016-03-08

Hi

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's


ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. 


 These comments were written with the intent of improving the 


operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed 


in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review. 


Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments



just like any other last call comments.

Document Reviewed: draft-ietf-ntp-checksum-trailer

Status: Ready with nits



Summary: This document describes a new NTP extension that adds a 2-octet 


checksum complement to the end of the UDP payload.






I feel the -05 version of this document addressed issues I had with the 


-04 version. The only other comment is about the examples in Appendix A. 


 I feel the 'Const' referenced there could be expressed in a more 


descriptive manner, but I am a loss to provide anything better.




tim