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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ntp-mode-6-cmds-08
review-ietf-ntp-mode-6-cmds-08-opsdir-lc-dunbar-2020-06-08-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ntp-mode-6-cmds
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2020-06-15
Requested 2020-06-01
Authors Brian Haberman
Draft last updated 2020-06-08
Completed reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -08 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Daniel Fox Franke (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -09 by Vijay K. Gurbani (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Linda Dunbar
State Completed
Review review-ietf-ntp-mode-6-cmds-08-opsdir-lc-dunbar-2020-06-08
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/FWFERltkc3MOvvnL6B_a5DuIAX8
Reviewed revision 08 (document currently at 11)
Result Has Nits
Completed 2020-06-08
review-ietf-ntp-mode-6-cmds-08-opsdir-lc-dunbar-2020-06-08-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the Ops area directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Ops area directors.
Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other
last call comments.

This document describes the structure of the control messages that were
historically used with the Network Time Protocol. Being historical document, I
would expect the document to give a description on what the Control Message are
for, who is the sender, and who is the receiver, is the Control Message
broadcast to every node in the network? or only between some nodes? The
document describes the bits in detail for Mode =6 and Mode =7. The RFC1305 has
a lot of information, but can't pinpoint the Control message's purpose. Are the
control messages for distributing time from Stratum 0 to Stratum 1?  or between
network nodes?

Thank you.
Linda Dunbar