Telechat Review of draft-ietf-nvo3-hpvr2nve-cp-req-13

Request Review of draft-ietf-nvo3-hpvr2nve-cp-req
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 17)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-02-20
Requested 2018-01-31
Authors Li Yizhou, Donald Eastlake, Larry Kreeger, Thomas Narten, David Black
Draft last updated 2018-02-06
Completed reviews Genart Telechat review of -13 by Brian Carpenter (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -15 by Scott Bradner (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -15 by Brian Carpenter (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Brian Carpenter
State Completed
Review review-ietf-nvo3-hpvr2nve-cp-req-13-genart-telechat-carpenter-2018-02-06
Reviewed rev. 13 (document currently at 17)
Review result Ready with Issues
Review completed: 2018-02-06


Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-pce-pcep-exp-codepoints-04

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Document: draft-ietf-nvo3-hpvr2nve-cp-req-13.txt
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2018-02-07
IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-20
IESG Telechat date: 2018-02-22

Summary: Ready (with minor issue)


This is a Last Call review despite the subject field.

Minor issue:

   Req-10: The protocol MUST allow an End Device initiating a request to
   add, remove or update address(es) associated with a TSI instance on
   the external NVE. Addresses can be expressed in different formats,
   for example, MAC, IP or pair of IP and MAC.

Here and elsewhere, it seems necessary to specify that an IP address
can be in either IPv4 or IPv6 format. (This is implied in Table 1
and at the end of Appendix A, but that's quite well hidden.)
I suggest clarifying this early, in Section 1.2 "Target Scenarios".