Last Call Review of draft-ietf-nvo3-use-case-15
review-ietf-nvo3-use-case-15-genart-lc-droms-2017-01-06-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-nvo3-use-case
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 17)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-01-04
Requested 2016-12-21
Authors Lucy Yong , Linda Dunbar , Mehmet Toy , Aldrin Isaac , Vishwas Manral
I-D last updated 2017-01-06
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -15 by Henning Rogge (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -15 by Donald E. Eastlake 3rd (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -15 by Ralph Droms (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -15 by Tim Wicinski (diff)
Tsvart Telechat review of -15 by David L. Black (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Ralph Droms
State Completed Snapshot
Review review-ietf-nvo3-use-case-15-genart-lc-droms-2017-01-06
Reviewed revision 15 (document currently at 17)
Result Ready with Nits
Completed 2017-01-06
review-ietf-nvo3-use-case-15-genart-lc-droms-2017-01-06-00
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Document: draft-ietf-nvo3-use-case-??
Reviewer: Ralph Droms
Review Date: 2017-01-06
IETF LC End Date: 2017-01-11
IESG Telechat date: 2017-01-19

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

I found several acronyms that did not have expansions.  I recommend a pass over
the document for unexpanded acronyms..

Section 2: What is "broadcast/unknown" traffic (spec. "unknown"?); please
expand the acronym "BUM".
  The paragraph that begins with "One NVO3 network [...]" is indented
  differently from the rest of the text.  Intentional or a typo?

Section 3.2: An illustrating figure for the use case described in this section
would be helpful.
  Expand acronyms "PE" and "ABSR".
  I found the text using "Option A" and "Option B" confusing.  Exactly what are
  those options?

Section 5: I didn't understand the references to IaaS, PaaS and SaaS in the
summary - there are no references to those services in the body of the
document, or back pointers from the summary to relevant preceding text.