Last Call Review of draft-ietf-oauth-dyn-reg-management-09
review-ietf-oauth-dyn-reg-management-09-opsdir-lc-taylor-2015-03-28-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-oauth-dyn-reg-management
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 15)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2015-04-07
Requested 2015-03-11
Other Reviews Genart Last Call review of -09 by Peter Yee (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -12 by Peter Yee (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -09 by Ben Laurie (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Tom Taylor
Review review-ietf-oauth-dyn-reg-management-09-opsdir-lc-taylor-2015-03-28
Posted at http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/ops-dir/current/msg00980.html
Reviewed rev. 09 (document currently at 15)
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2015-03-28
Review completed: 2015-03-28

Review
review-ietf-oauth-dyn-reg-management-09-opsdir-lc-taylor-2015-03-28

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's


ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. 


 These comments were written with the intent of improving the 


operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed 


in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review. 


Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any 


other last call comments.






Summary: this document is good to go. The IANA reservations recorded in 


the history appear to be sorted out with this version and the latest 


version of draft-ietf-oauth-dyn-reg. Otherwise, the document is 


well-written and well-specified.




Tom Taylor