Last Call Review of draft-ietf-oauth-introspection-08
review-ietf-oauth-introspection-08-opsdir-lc-morand-2015-06-23-00

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This document is well-written, clear and almost ready to be published. I have
however some comments:



1/ I share the comment from Barry regarding "MUST support POST, and MAY support
GET" in section 2.1.

2/ Sorry if it is obvious but there is no indication on how the protected
resources discover the introspection endpoint to which send the request. It
might be explained in some other documents but we could find this information
 in this document as well (or at least a reference).



Minors comments:



sect 2.1:



   The endpoint MAY allow other parameters to provide further context to

   the query.  For instance, an authorization service may need to know

   the IP address of the client accessing the protected resource in

   order to determine the appropriateness of the token being presented.



Which endpoint are you referring to at the beginning of the sentence?
introspection endpoint, Authorization endpoint, token endpoint, other ? I guess
it is the first one but please clarify.



In the second sentence, I think it is "authorization server" instead of
"authorization service"



Regards,



Lionel

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