Last Call Review of draft-ietf-oauth-jwsreq-11

Request Review of draft-ietf-oauth-jwsreq
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 30)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-02-13
Requested 2017-01-30
Authors Nat Sakimura, John Bradley, Michael Jones
Draft last updated 2017-02-02
Completed reviews Opsdir Telechat review of -09 by Warren Kumari (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -09 by Stephen Kent (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -09 by Joel Halpern (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -11 by Warren Kumari (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -11 by Stephen Kent (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -11 by Joel Halpern (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -30 by Watson Ladd
Genart Last Call review of -30 by Joel Halpern
Assignment Reviewer Joel Halpern 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-oauth-jwsreq-11-genart-lc-halpern-2017-02-02
Reviewed rev. 11 (document currently at 30)
Review result Not Ready
Review completed: 2017-02-02


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Document: draft-ietf-oauth-jwsreq-??
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2017-02-02
IETF LC End Date: 2017-02-13
IESG Telechat date: 2017-02-16

Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard

Major issues: N/A

Minor issues:
    Why is the example if section 4 (and others later on) described as
"non-normative"?  Is it incomplete?  incorrect?  An example is, by
definition, not a full specification.  The language seems designed to
reduce the value of the example.  I would recommend removing all the
"non-normative" notes from the examples.  They are clearly stated to
be examples. 

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