Last Call Review of draft-ietf-oauth-mtls-15
review-ietf-oauth-mtls-15-secdir-lc-roca-2019-07-25-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-oauth-mtls
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 16)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2019-08-01
Requested 2019-07-11
Draft last updated 2019-07-25
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -15 by Vincent Roca (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -15 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Vincent Roca
State Completed
Review review-ietf-oauth-mtls-15-secdir-lc-roca-2019-07-25
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/6X4VgtCdICmagOxcN6MMJAMWBX8
Reviewed rev. 15 (document currently at 16)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2019-07-25

Review
review-ietf-oauth-mtls-15-secdir-lc-roca-2019-07-25

Hello,

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate’s ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area
directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.

Summary: Ready

The Security considerations and privacy considerations sections both look sound 
to me. 

Nits: 
* section 7.1: s/to which they where issued/to which they were issued/

Cheers.  Vincent