Last Call Review of draft-ietf-oauth-mtls-15
review-ietf-oauth-mtls-15-secdir-lc-roca-2019-07-25-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-oauth-mtls |
|---|---|---|
| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 17) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | Security Area Directorate (secdir) | |
| Deadline | 2019-08-01 | |
| Requested | 2019-07-11 | |
| Authors | Brian Campbell , John Bradley , Nat Sakimura , Torsten Lodderstedt | |
| I-D last updated | 2019-07-25 | |
| Completed reviews |
Secdir Last Call review of -15
by Vincent Roca
(diff)
Genart Last Call review of -15 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Vincent Roca |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-oauth-mtls by Security Area Directorate Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/6X4VgtCdICmagOxcN6MMJAMWBX8 | |
| Reviewed revision | 15 (document currently at 17) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2019-07-25 |
review-ietf-oauth-mtls-15-secdir-lc-roca-2019-07-25-00
Hello, I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate’s ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. Summary: Ready The Security considerations and privacy considerations sections both look sound to me. Nits: * section 7.1: s/to which they where issued/to which they were issued/ Cheers. Vincent