Last Call Review of draft-ietf-oauth-par-08
review-ietf-oauth-par-08-genart-lc-shirazipour-2021-06-06-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-oauth-par |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 10) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2021-06-08 | |
| Requested | 2021-05-25 | |
| Authors | Torsten Lodderstedt , Brian Campbell , Nat Sakimura , Dave Tonge , Filip Skokan | |
| I-D last updated | 2021-06-06 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -08
by Meral Shirazipour
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Meral Shirazipour |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-oauth-par by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/zMj_dO_nJhApvu4uBCSrkTLrXkY | |
| Reviewed revision | 08 (document currently at 10) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2021-06-06 |
review-ietf-oauth-par-08-genart-lc-shirazipour-2021-06-06-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-oauth-par-08 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2021-06-06 IETF LC End Date: 2021-06-08 IESG Telechat date: NA Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: -[Page 4], Sec 1.1, "because the the request "---->"because the request " Best Regards, Meral Shirazipour