Last Call Review of draft-ietf-oauth-revocation-07
review-ietf-oauth-revocation-07-secdir-lc-yu-2013-05-02-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-oauth-revocation
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2013-04-30
Requested 2013-04-18
Draft last updated 2013-05-02
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -07 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -09 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Taylor Yu (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Taylor Yu
State Completed
Review review-ietf-oauth-revocation-07-secdir-lc-yu-2013-05-02
Reviewed rev. 07 (document currently at 11)
Review result Has Nits
Review completed: 2013-05-02

Review
review-ietf-oauth-revocation-07-secdir-lc-yu-2013-05-02

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

I find the security considerations section of this document to be
mostly adequate.  It should probably mention the importance of
authenticating the endpoint (certificate validation etc.), especially
if the token is a bearer token.

Someone who is more familiar with the implications of cross-origin
issues should look at Section 2.3 to determine whether additional
security considerations need mentioning.