Last Call Review of draft-ietf-oauth-saml2-bearer-21
review-ietf-oauth-saml2-bearer-21-genart-lc-shirazipour-2014-09-29-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-oauth-saml2-bearer
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 23)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2014-09-29
Requested 2014-09-17
Authors Brian Campbell , Chuck Mortimore , Michael B. Jones
I-D last updated 2014-09-29
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -21 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -21 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -21 by Vincent Roca (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -21 by Tom Taylor (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-oauth-saml2-bearer by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 21 (document currently at 23)
Result Ready
Completed 2014-09-29
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Document: draft-ietf-oauth-saml2-bearer-21

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour

Review Date: 2014-09-29

IETF LC End Date:  2014-09-29

IESG Telechat date: NA





Summary:

This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC .





Nits/editorial comments:

Nits:

-Abstract, please consider smelling out Security Assertion Markup Language

-[Page 4] Section 2.1 ",use an access ..", it would be clearer to name the
entity (AS?) who would have to "use and access token...".

-[Page 5] Section 2.2 ", use the following parameter", same comment as above.



Best Regards,

Meral

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Meral Shirazipour

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