Last Call Review of draft-ietf-oauth-urn-sub-ns-05
review-ietf-oauth-urn-sub-ns-05-genart-lc-campbell-2012-07-04-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-oauth-urn-sub-ns |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 06) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2012-07-11 | |
| Requested | 2012-06-28 | |
| Authors | Brian Campbell , Hannes Tschofenig | |
| Draft last updated | 2012-07-04 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -05
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Ben Campbell
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Secdir Last Call review of -?? by Tero Kivinen |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Ben Campbell |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-oauth-urn-sub-ns-05-genart-lc-campbell-2012-07-04
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| Reviewed revision | 05 (document currently at 06) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2012-07-04 |
review-ietf-oauth-urn-sub-ns-05-genart-lc-campbell-2012-07-04-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-oauth-urn-sub-ns-05 Reviewer: Ben Campbell Review Date: 2012-07-03 IETF LC End Date: 2012-07-11 Summary: Ready for publication as a proposed standard Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: -- section 2: The RFC 2119 boilerplate is present, but I don't notice any 2119 normative language. -- section 4, first sentence: "None not already inherent to using URNs." Sentence Fragment. -- section 5.1, last bullet, "... values subordinate to urn:ietf:params:oauth are of the from ..." Missing word?