Telechat Review of draft-ietf-oauth-v2-threatmodel-

Request Review of draft-ietf-oauth-v2-threatmodel
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2012-08-17
Requested 2012-08-03
Authors Torsten Lodderstedt, Mark McGloin, Phil Hunt
Draft last updated 2012-08-31
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -?? by Miguel García
Genart Telechat review of -?? by Miguel García
Assignment Reviewer Miguel García 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-oauth-v2-threatmodel-genart-telechat-garcia-2012-08-31
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2012-08-31


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Please resolve these comments along with any other comments you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-oauth-v2-threatmodel-06.txt
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <Miguel.A.Garcia at>
Review Date: 2012-08-30
IESG Telechat date: 2012-08-30

Summary: The document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC.

I reviewed version -06 of this document, indicating that the document was 

ready for publication. In the current version -07, new sections have been 

added. I have reviewed the new and modified text, and I only have an 

editorial comment (see below).

Major issues: none

Minor issues: none

Nits/editorial comments:

There is a typo in the title of Section 8.1. It says "Informative 

References", but I guess it should say "Normative References", because 

the "Information References" are listed in Section 8.2.


Miguel A. Garcia
Ericsson Spain