Last Call Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-9092-update-06
review-ietf-opsawg-9092-update-06-intdir-lc-jiang-2023-11-20-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-9092-update
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team Internet Area Directorate (intdir)
Deadline 2023-11-06
Requested 2023-10-23
Requested by Joe Clarke
Authors Randy Bush , Massimo Candela , Warren Kumari , Russ Housley
I-D last updated 2024-08-07 (Latest revision 2024-02-22)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -09 by Christer Holmberg (diff)
Intdir IETF Last Call review of -06 by Sheng Jiang (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -06 by Bo Wu (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -09 by Tim Hollebeek (diff)
Artart IETF Last Call review of -09 by Spencer Dawkins (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Sheng Jiang
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-opsawg-9092-update by Internet Area Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/int-dir/fVet7bIN16HfpUzYj19eTBUvUMw
Reviewed revision 06 (document currently at 11)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2023-11-20
review-ietf-opsawg-9092-update-06-intdir-lc-jiang-2023-11-20-00
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Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-9092-update-06
Reviewer: Sheng Jiang
Review Date: 2023-11-20
Result: Ready with Nits

This Standards Track document specifies how to augment the 
Routing Policy Specification Language inetnum: class to 
refer specifically to geofeed data files and describes an 
optional scheme that uses the Resource Public Key 
Infrastructure to authenticate the geofeed datafiles. It intends
to obsolete RFC 9092. It is well written and almost ready with 
several Nits regarding to references, see beloww.

Obsolete normative reference: RFC 2818 (Obsoleted by RFC 9110)
Obsolete normative reference: RFC 6486 (Obsoleted by RFC 9286)
Downref: Normative reference to an Informational RFC: RFC 8805