Last Call Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-9092-update-06
review-ietf-opsawg-9092-update-06-opsdir-lc-wu-2023-11-22-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-9092-update
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2023-11-06
Requested 2023-10-23
Requested by Joe Clarke
Authors Randy Bush , Massimo Candela , Warren Kumari , Russ Housley
I-D last updated 2024-08-07 (Latest revision 2024-02-22)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -09 by Christer Holmberg (diff)
Intdir IETF Last Call review of -06 by Sheng Jiang (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -06 by Bo Wu (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -09 by Tim Hollebeek (diff)
Artart IETF Last Call review of -09 by Spencer Dawkins (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Bo Wu
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-opsawg-9092-update by Ops Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/8N_l5-KdRVpWsuTwXdI5Oh4kXUQ
Reviewed revision 06 (document currently at 11)
Result Has nits
Completed 2023-11-22
review-ietf-opsawg-9092-update-06-opsdir-lc-wu-2023-11-22-00
Hi all,

I have reviewed this document as Ops area reviewer.

This document updates RFC 9092, adding new sections of Fetching Geofeed data
and the implementation of Geofeed, and supplements and optimizes the original
sections based on practices. The document is well written and almost ready with
small nits as below.

1. Abbreviations
Severl abbreviations in the newly added text is better to be expanded on the
first use, including Certification Authority (CA), EE (end-entity), Certificate
Revocation List (CRL) and Autonomous System (AS).

2. Content seems repetitive
Section 3:
Any particular inetnum: object SHOULD have, at most, one geofeed
   reference, whether a remarks: or a proper geofeed: attribute when it
   is implemented.  If there is more than one, the geofeed: attribute
   SHOULD be used.

Section 4:
If an inetnum: object has both remarks: with geofeed data and also has a
geofeed: attribute, the geofeed: attribute SHOULD be used and the remarks:
ignored