Last Call Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-coman-use-cases-03
review-ietf-opsawg-coman-use-cases-03-genart-lc-thomson-2015-01-02-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-opsawg-coman-use-cases |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 05) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2015-01-14 | |
Requested | 2015-01-02 | |
Authors | Mehmet Ersue , Dan Romascanu , Jürgen Schönwälder , Anuj Sehgal | |
I-D last updated | 2015-01-02 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -03
by Martin Thomson
(diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -03 by Matthew A. Miller (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -03 by Linda Dunbar (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Martin Thomson |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-opsawg-coman-use-cases by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 03 (document currently at 05) | |
Result | Ready | |
Completed | 2015-01-02 |
review-ietf-opsawg-coman-use-cases-03-genart-lc-thomson-2015-01-02-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-coman-use-cases-03 Reviewer: Martin Thomson Review Date: 2015-01-02 IETF LC End Date: IESG Telechat date: (if known) Summary: Ship it. Nits/editorial comments: I think that there are a few too many Unnecessarily Capitalized Phrases. Consider downcasing for statements like "Power, Energy, Demand and Power Quality" or "It is assumed that Energy Management will ". s/100.000/100,000/