Last Call Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community-07
review-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community-07-secdir-lc-emery-2018-09-20-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 12) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | Security Area Directorate (secdir) | |
Deadline | 2018-09-24 | |
Requested | 2018-09-10 | |
Authors | Zhenqiang Li , Rong Gu , Jie Dong | |
I-D last updated | 2018-09-20 | |
Completed reviews |
Opsdir Telechat review of -10
by Al Morton
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Genart Early review of -04 by Joel M. Halpern (diff) Rtgdir Early review of -06 by Joel M. Halpern (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Shawn M Emery (diff) Genart Last Call review of -07 by Joel M. Halpern (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -08 by Al Morton (diff) Genart Telechat review of -11 by Joel M. Halpern (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Shawn M Emery |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community by Security Area Directorate Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 07 (document currently at 12) | |
Result | Has nits | |
Completed | 2018-09-20 |
review-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community-07-secdir-lc-emery-2018-09-20-00
Reviewer: Shawn M. Emery Review result: Ready with numerous nits I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. This draft specifies new Information Elements (IEs) in order to support BGP community information for the IP Flow Information eXport (IPFIX) protocol. The security considerations section does exist and states that the draft just defines new IEs and does not introduce any new security considerations. The section then goes on to state that the same security issues that apply to the IPFIX protocol and the corresponding Information Model applies to this specification. I agree with these assertions. General comments: None. Editorial comments: s/differnt/different/g s/Netwok/Network/ s/statistic/statistics/ s/mediator needs/the mediator needs/ s/Mediator is/The mediator is/ s/figure up/determine/g s/mechanisum/mechanism/ s/generted/generated/ s/Please refer/Please refer to/g s/originated from AS A and destinated/originating from AS A and destined/ s/becuse it will cause the congestion/because it will cause congestion/ s/togecher/together/ s/source IP and destination IP/source and destination IP address/g s/both the source IP and the destination IP related/relating to both the source and destination IP addresses/ s/length one IPFIX/length of one IPFIX/ s/to the information about the networks in the field/to information about networks in the field/ OLD: configure export policy of BGP communities on the exporter to limit the BGP communities to be exported, so as to only export some specific communities,or not to export some specific communities. NEW: configure the export policy of BGP communities to limit the BGP communities by including or excluding specific communities. s/The detailed mechanism is out of the scope of this document./The details of increasing IPFIX message length is out of scope for this document./ s/refer Appendix A/refer to Appendix A/ s/source or destination IP/source or destination IP address/ Shawn. --