Telechat Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-20
review-ietf-opsawg-mud-20-opsdir-telechat-bradner-2018-04-10-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mud
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 25)
Type Telechat Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2018-04-17
Requested 2018-03-13
Authors Eliot Lear , Ralph Droms , Dan Romascanu
I-D last updated 2018-04-10
Completed reviews Secdir Early review of -08 by Adam W. Montville (diff)
Genart Early review of -08 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Iotdir Early review of -08 by Henk Birkholz (diff)
Yangdoctors Early review of -08 by Martin Björklund (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -13 by Adrian Farrel (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -13 by Adam W. Montville (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -20 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -20 by Scott O. Bradner (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Scott O. Bradner
State Completed
Review review-ietf-opsawg-mud-20-opsdir-telechat-bradner-2018-04-10
Reviewed revision 20 (document currently at 25)
Result Has Nits
Completed 2018-04-10
review-ietf-opsawg-mud-20-opsdir-telechat-bradner-2018-04-10-00
I did an OPS-DIR review of Manufacturer Usage Description Specification <
draft-ietf-opsawg-mud > The specification is well written and clear (I also
agree with Robert Spark's nits).

One suggestion about document organization: I would either move the discussion
of what should be done if the MUD controller can not retrieve the MUD file for
some reason or another out of the security considerations section to after
section 1.9 or at least include a forward pointer to the discussion.