Early Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-nat-yang-09

Request Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-nat-yang-09
Requested rev. 09 (document currently at 17)
Type Early Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-01-09
Requested 2017-12-19
Requested by Joe Clarke
Other Reviews Yangdoctors Early review of -06 by Jürgen Schönwälder (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -09 by Mach Chen (diff)
Opsdir Early review of -10 by Tim Chown (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -14 by Roni Even (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -14 by Stephen Farrell (diff)
Tsvart Telechat review of -16 by Joerg Ott (diff)
Document is currently in WG LC.  Seeking additional reviews.
Review State Completed
Reviewer Roni Even
Review review-ietf-opsawg-nat-yang-09-genart-early-even-2018-01-06
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/JpJFsKU4nyCDZw95-3504q25SoI
Reviewed rev. 09 (document currently at 17)
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2018-01-06
Review completed: 2018-01-06


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Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: January 7th, 2018
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I have no comments about the document text. I am not a Yang expert so did not verify the correctness of the Yang module 

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