Last Call Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-pcaplinktype-04
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Request Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-pcaplinktype
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2024-08-26
Requested 2024-08-12
Requested by Joe Clarke
Authors Guy Harris , Michael Richardson
I-D last updated 2024-08-15
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -04 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Intdir Last Call review of -05 by Carlos J. Bernardos (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Joel M. Halpern
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-opsawg-pcaplinktype by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/cuLKJjZwBKVbeKclE4YB4E4VMz0
Reviewed revision 04 (document currently at 08)
Result Almost ready
Completed 2024-08-15
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Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-pcaplinktype-04
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2024-08-15
IETF LC End Date: None
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This document is almost ready for publication as an Informational RFC.

Major issues:
    While it may be vacuous, it is necessary to include a security
    considerations section.

Minor issues:
    (Unclear if this is Major or Minor): The table layout for the IANA registry
    fails to conform to I-D / RFC requirements.  Considered as text, it is much
    too wide.  Considered as HTML, the normal rendering blocks important parts
    of the table.  I recommend asking the RPC and IANA how to format the I-D so
    as to produce a suitable RFC.

Nits/editorial comments: N/A