Last Call Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-sap-12
review-ietf-opsawg-sap-12-genart-lc-dunbar-2023-01-03-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-sap
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 15)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2023-01-09
Requested 2022-12-19
Authors Mohamed Boucadair , Oscar Gonzalez de Dios , Samier Barguil , Qin Wu , Victor Lopez
I-D last updated 2023-01-03
Completed reviews Yangdoctors Early review of -02 by Martin Björklund (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -04 by Menachem Dodge (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -04 by Mach Chen (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -12 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -13 by Ivaylo Petrov (diff)
Rtgdir Telechat review of -13 by Mach Chen (diff)
Yangdoctors Telechat review of -13 by Martin Björklund (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Linda Dunbar
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-opsawg-sap by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/ItsyANCW6Oj_lsbpj7gAxWiyOfU
Reviewed revision 12 (document currently at 15)
Result Ready
Completed 2023-01-03
review-ietf-opsawg-sap-12-genart-lc-dunbar-2023-01-03-00
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Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-sap-12
Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review Date: 2023-01-03
IETF LC End Date: 2023-01-09
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: The document specifies the YANG data model for the Network Service
Attachment Points.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

It seems to me that the Network Service Attachment Points are very similar to
Network Termination Points. What are the major differences?

Thank you
Linda Dunbar