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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-yang-09
review-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-yang-09-genart-lc-sethi-2021-03-20-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-yang
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 12)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2021-03-29
Requested 2021-03-15
Authors Bo Wu , Guangying Zheng , Zitao Wang
I-D last updated 2021-03-20
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -03 by Yaron Sheffer (diff)
Yangdoctors Last Call review of -03 by Ladislav Lhotka (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -09 by Yaron Sheffer (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -09 by Mohit Sethi (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Mohit Sethi
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-yang by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
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Reviewed revision 09 (document currently at 12)
Result Ready
Completed 2021-03-20
review-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-yang-09-genart-lc-sethi-2021-03-20-00
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Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-yang-09
Reviewer: Mohit Sethi
Review Date: 2021-03-20
IETF LC End Date: 2021-03-29
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This document defines a TACACS+ YANG module for configuring TACACS+
clients so that they can use TACACS+ servers as an alternative to RADIUS
servers or local user configuration.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
Perhaps expand TACACS+ on first usage. The same for FIB. Perhaps add the
acronym AAA to the first usage of Authentication, Authorization and Accounting