Last Call Review of draft-ietf-opsec-ipv6-host-scanning-07
review-ietf-opsec-ipv6-host-scanning-07-genart-lc-dupont-2015-07-17-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-opsec-ipv6-host-scanning
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-07-08
Requested 2015-06-25
Authors Fernando Gont, Tim Chown
Draft last updated 2015-07-17
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -07 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Dacheng Zhang (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Francis Dupont 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-opsec-ipv6-host-scanning-07-genart-lc-dupont-2015-07-17
Reviewed rev. 07 (document currently at 08)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2015-07-17

Review
review-ietf-opsec-ipv6-host-scanning-07-genart-lc-dupont-2015-07-17

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Document: draft-ietf-opsec-ipv6-host-scanning-07.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20150710
IETF LC End Date: 20150708
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
 - Abstract page 1: usually there is no very explicit reference to the
  RFC the document obsoletes. IMHO this case could be a reasonable
  exception.

 - ToC page 3 and 18 page 25: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments
  (I use a US English spell checker, I am trying to switch to
   a UK one but both raise errors for the other alternative...
   I suggest to ask the RFC Editor to uniformize/uniformise the
   English variant...)

 - 1 page 3 and many other places: e.g. -> e.g.,

 - A.1 page 29 (and other places): I have a concern about OS names,
  for instance I prefer Microsoft Windows to simply Windows.
  BTW the current offical name of Mac OS (MacOS) X is (Apple) OS X.

Regards

Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr