Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ospf-encapsulation-cap-06
review-ietf-ospf-encapsulation-cap-06-opsdir-lc-hares-2017-09-06-01

Gunter and OPS-DIR:

I’m confused whether this draft is in my review queue or not.  Since Tim[‘s
review has taken care of the other issues, I will confine my review to the link
to draft-ietf-idr-tunnel-encaps.    Please note in the last review by IDR of
draft-ietf-idr-tunnel-encaps there was a great deal of discussion on the draft.

I reviewed this draft to determine if draft-ietf-idr-tunnel-encaps-06 matches
draft-ietf-ospf-encapsulation-cap-06.txt.  It does.  I plan to start a WG LC on
the draft-ietf-idr-tunnel-encaps-06.txt this week.  It may change during this
review since the last WG LC caused several changes.

Of course, I could not resist indicating one editorial nit.  Otherwise they
might take my editor’s red pen away from me (smile).

Please note in section 3, paragraph 1, 4th sentence

Old/If the Encapsulation Capability TLV appears more than one in an OSPF Router
Information LSA, only the first occurrence MUST be processed and others MUST be
ignored./

It may be wise to specify something more detailed in the dependent clause.

New /If the Encapsulation Capability TLV appears more than one in an OSPF
Router Information LSA, only the first occurrence MUST be processed and the
subsequent Encapsulation Capability TLVs MUST be ignored./

I only mention it because it might impact the testing of these features.

Best wishes, Sue Hares