Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ospf-encapsulation-cap-06
review-ietf-ospf-encapsulation-cap-06-opsdir-lc-wicinski-2017-08-29-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-ospf-encapsulation-cap |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 09) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
| Deadline | 2017-08-28 | |
| Requested | 2017-08-14 | |
| Authors | Xiaohu Xu , Bruno Decraene , Robert Raszuk , Luis M. Contreras , Luay Jalil | |
| I-D last updated | 2017-08-29 | |
| Completed reviews |
Opsdir Last Call review of -06
by Tim Wicinski
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Tsvart Last Call review of -06 by Dr. Joseph D. Touch (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -06 by David Mandelberg (diff) Genart Last Call review of -06 by Pete Resnick (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Susan Hares (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Tim Wicinski |
| State | Partially Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-ospf-encapsulation-cap-06-opsdir-lc-wicinski-2017-08-29
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| Reviewed revision | 06 (document currently at 09) | |
| Result | Has Issues | |
| Completed | 2017-08-29 |
review-ietf-ospf-encapsulation-cap-06-opsdir-lc-wicinski-2017-08-29-00
Summary: Almost Ready The content appears to be fine, but there are some outdated (the biggest one is 5226 replaced by 8126), but its the IANA section which appears the most confusing. 7.1 OSPF Router Information (RI) Registry - appears fine 7.2 OSPF Tunnel Encapsulation Attribute Sub-TLV Registry This one defines the values being defined/allocated from "This Document" but in Section 5, each Sub-TLV is defined in other documents, so it's totally confusing.