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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ospf-encapsulation-cap-06
review-ietf-ospf-encapsulation-cap-06-opsdir-lc-wicinski-2017-08-29-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ospf-encapsulation-cap
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2017-08-28
Requested 2017-08-14
Authors Xiaohu Xu , Bruno Decraene , Robert Raszuk , Luis M. Contreras , Luay Jalil
I-D last updated 2017-08-29
Completed reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Tim Wicinski (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -06 by Dr. Joseph D. Touch (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -06 by David Mandelberg (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -06 by Pete Resnick (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Susan Hares (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Tim Wicinski
State Partially completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-ospf-encapsulation-cap by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 06 (document currently at 09)
Result Has issues
Completed 2017-08-29
review-ietf-ospf-encapsulation-cap-06-opsdir-lc-wicinski-2017-08-29-00
Summary: Almost Ready

The content appears to be fine, but there are some outdated (the biggest one is
5226 replaced by 8126), but its the IANA section which appears the most
confusing.

7.1 OSPF Router Information (RI) Registry -  appears fine

7.2 OSPF Tunnel Encapsulation Attribute Sub-TLV Registry

This one defines the values being defined/allocated from "This Document" but in
Section 5, each Sub-TLV is defined in other documents, so it's totally
confusing.