Telechat Review of draft-ietf-ospf-ipv4-embedded-ipv6-routing-11

Request Review of draft-ietf-ospf-ipv4-embedded-ipv6-routing
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 14)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-04-23
Requested 2013-04-17
Authors Dean Cheng, Mohamed Boucadair, Alvaro Retana
Draft last updated 2013-11-27
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -07 by Ben Campbell (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -11 by Ben Campbell (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Ben Laurie (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Ben Campbell 
State Completed Snapshot
Review review-ietf-ospf-ipv4-embedded-ipv6-routing-11-genart-telechat-campbell-2013-11-27
Reviewed rev. 11 (document currently at 14)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2013-11-27


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Document: draft-ietf-ospf-ipv4-embedded-ipv6-routing-11 
Reviewer: Ben Campbell
Review Date: 2013-04-19
IESG Telechat date: 2013-04-25

Summary: Ready for publication as an informational RFC. All of the comments from my previous review of version 07 have been addressed. However, there 

Major issues:


Minor issues:


Nits/editorial comments:

Note: The online IDNits tool appears to be broken today, so I was unable to recheck this version.

There is a new section 12 added since version 07. If there is another revision prior to approval, I suggest the authors make another pass at proofreading it. If not, the errors are all of the sort that can be reasonably fixed by the RFC editor. Some specifics:

-- paragraph 3, 1st sentence: "If one approach is to be deployed, it is the operator's decision for the choice."

-- paragraph 4, 1st sentence: "... there requires some configurations."