Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ospf-link-overload-11
review-ietf-ospf-link-overload-11-genart-lc-halpern-2018-01-04-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ospf-link-overload
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 12)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-01-16
Requested 2018-01-02
Other Reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -09 by Martin Vigoureux (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -10 by Joel Halpern (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -11 by Sean Turner (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Joel Halpern
Review review-ietf-ospf-link-overload-11-genart-lc-halpern-2018-01-04
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/UU8dQqIwvQEepYg_1Wl5TyAOyYY
Reviewed rev. 11 (document currently at 12)
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2018-01-04
Review completed: 2018-01-04

Review
review-ietf-ospf-link-overload-11-genart-lc-halpern-2018-01-04

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Document: draft-ietf-ospf-link-overload-11
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2018-01-04
IETF LC End Date: 2018-01-16
IESG Telechat date: 2018-01-25

Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard

Major issues:
    N/A; my concerns from earlier versions have been addressed.

Minor issues:
    I understand the WG likes using the term "overload" for a link being taken out of service.  I think people will learn what we mean.  I do wish we had not chosen to misuse the words in this fashion.  This is much more a graceful-link-close indication (or clsoe-pending indication) than it is an overload indication.

Nits/editorial comments: