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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ospf-lls-interface-id-06
review-ietf-ospf-lls-interface-id-06-opsdir-lc-jiang-2018-10-09-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ospf-lls-interface-id
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2018-10-10
Requested 2018-09-26
Authors Peter Psenak , Ketan Talaulikar , Wim Henderickx , Padma Pillay-Esnault
I-D last updated 2018-10-09
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -03 by Loa Andersson (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -06 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Sheng Jiang (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Sheng Jiang
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-ospf-lls-interface-id by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 06 (document currently at 09)
Result Has nits
Completed 2018-10-09
review-ietf-ospf-lls-interface-id-06-opsdir-lc-jiang-2018-10-09-00
Hi, OPS-DIR, Authors,

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments
were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF
drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD
reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

This standard track document defines a new option Local Interface Identifier in
OSPF Hello and Database Description (DD) packets as an extensions to OSPF
link-local signalling. This document is short and well written. It is READY
with a couple of Nits, which should be easily fixed.

Major issue: no.

Minor issue: no.

Nits:

Unused Reference: 'RFC8379'. There is no relevant text. Either some text should
be added or this reference should be deleted.

In the IANA section,  "18 - Local Interface Identifier TLV". Normally the value
that is actually assigned should be left to IANA. Here, it should be TBD as a
draft.

Regards,

Sheng