Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ospf-ospfv2-hbit-10
review-ietf-ospf-ospfv2-hbit-10-tsvart-lc-rose-2019-10-31-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ospf-ospfv2-hbit
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Last Call Review
Team Transport Area Review Team (tsvart)
Deadline 2019-11-07
Requested 2019-10-24
Authors Keyur Patel, Padma Pillay-Esnault, Manish Bhardwaj, Serpil Bayraktar
Draft last updated 2019-10-31
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -09 by He Jia (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -10 by Mohit Sethi
Tsvart Last Call review of -10 by Kyle Rose
Opsdir Last Call review of -10 by Tim Chown
Assignment Reviewer Kyle Rose
State Completed
Review review-ietf-ospf-ospfv2-hbit-10-tsvart-lc-rose-2019-10-31
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/tsv-art/f1Ub0IzN079kQeRjl8cc3vogJlY
Reviewed rev. 10
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2019-10-31

Review
review-ietf-ospf-ospfv2-hbit-10-tsvart-lc-rose-2019-10-31

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This document is basically ready. I have the following comments:

* LSA should be defined where it is first used.
* I'm curious what happens if a router sets the H-bit when it is on the only
feasible transit path.
* In the security considerations, the document states:

q( The feature, however does introduce the flooding of a capability
   information that allows discovery and verification that all routers
   in an area are capable before turning on the feature )

I'm not sure "flooding" is the right term here, as the communication
comprising the OSPF control plane is not new: only a single bit has a
new meaning. This statement is also worded awkwardly, but without
a clearer understanding of what is meant, I don't know that I can
suggest alternative wording.