Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ospf-prefix-link-attr-10
review-ietf-ospf-prefix-link-attr-10-opsdir-lc-bonica-2015-08-23-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ospf-prefix-link-attr
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 13)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2015-08-18
Requested 2015-08-13
Authors Peter Psenak , Hannes Gredler , Rob Shakir , Wim Henderickx , Jeff Tantsura , Acee Lindem
I-D last updated 2015-08-23
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -06 by Suresh Krishnan (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -10 by Suresh Krishnan (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -07 by Carlos Pignataro (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -10 by Ron Bonica (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Ron Bonica
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-ospf-prefix-link-attr by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 10 (document currently at 13)
Result Ready
Completed 2015-08-23
review-ietf-ospf-prefix-link-attr-10-opsdir-lc-bonica-2015-08-23-00
Folks,

I have reviewed draft-ietf-ospf-prefix-link-attr-10 as part of the Operational
directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by
the IESG.  These comments were written with the intent of improving the
operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last
call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors
and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call
comments.

Short Summary

This document defines OSPF opaque LSAs based on Type-Length-Value (TLV) tuples
that can be used to associate additional attributes with prefixes or links. 
Dependent on the application, these prefixes and links may or not be advertised
in the fixed-format LSAs.  The OSPF opaque LSAs are optional and fully backward
compatible.

Evaluation

This document is ready for publication. The opaque LSA's solve real problems
and the document is well written.

Nits

The Nit Checker complains about outdated references, but these can be addressed
by the RFC editor.

Ron Bonica