Telechat Review of draft-ietf-ospf-segment-routing-extensions-22
review-ietf-ospf-segment-routing-extensions-22-genart-telechat-romascanu-2017-12-05-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ospf-segment-routing-extensions
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 24)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-12-12
Requested 2017-11-27
Other Reviews Rtgdir Early review of -12 by Stig Venaas (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -17 by Susan Hares (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -16 by John Drake (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -19 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Dan Romascanu
Review review-ietf-ospf-segment-routing-extensions-22-genart-telechat-romascanu-2017-12-05
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/Yws4yhpggVHTZjoLZ5VRPqcegFE
Reviewed rev. 22 (document currently at 24)
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2017-12-05
Review completed: 2017-12-05

Review
review-ietf-ospf-segment-routing-extensions-22-genart-telechat-romascanu-2017-12-05

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Document: draft-ietf-ospf-segment-routing-extensions-22
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
Review Date: 2017-12-05
IETF LC End Date: 2017-10-13
IESG Telechat date: 2017-12-14

Summary: Ready

A useful and well-written document. It requires previous reading and understanding of OSPF, SPRING and other routing work. It is Ready for publication. My initial review included a few minor requests for clarifications. Most of these were addressed with text changes or additions. 

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