Telechat Review of draft-ietf-ospf-ttz-06
review-ietf-ospf-ttz-06-opsdir-telechat-dunbar-2017-01-17-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ospf-ttz
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Telechat Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2017-01-03
Requested 2016-12-16
Authors Huaimo Chen , Richard Li , Alvaro Retana , Yi Yang , Vic Liu
I-D last updated 2017-01-17
Completed reviews Rtgdir Early review of -03 by Christian Hopps (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -05 by Orit Levin (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -06 by Linda Dunbar
Assignment Reviewer Linda Dunbar
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-ospf-ttz by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 06
Result Ready
Completed 2017-01-17
review-ietf-ospf-ttz-06-opsdir-telechat-dunbar-2017-01-17-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the operational area
directors.

Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other
last call comments.

I think the document is written very clear. The management & operation aspect
of changing to topology-transparent zone from existing OSPF topology is
described very clearly.

Linda Dunbar

Huawei USA IP Technology Lab

5340 Legacy Drive,

Plano, TX 75024

Tel: +1 469-277 - 5840

Fax: +1 469 -277 - 5900