Telechat Review of draft-ietf-ospf-ttz-06
review-ietf-ospf-ttz-06-opsdir-telechat-dunbar-2017-01-17-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ospf-ttz
Requested rev. no specific revision
Type Telechat Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2017-01-03
Requested 2016-12-16
Other Reviews Rtgdir Early review of -03 by Christian Hopps (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -05 by Orit Levin (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Linda Dunbar
Review review-ietf-ospf-ttz-06-opsdir-telechat-dunbar-2017-01-17
Posted at https://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/ops-dir/current/msg02389.html
Reviewed rev. 06
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2017-01-17
Review completed: 2017-01-17

Review
review-ietf-ospf-ttz-06-opsdir-telechat-dunbar-2017-01-17

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the operational area directors.

Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

 

I think the document is written very clear. The management & operation aspect of changing to topology-transparent zone from existing OSPF topology is described very clearly.  

 

 

Linda Dunbar

 

 

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