Telechat Review of draft-ietf-ospf-xaf-te-06
review-ietf-ospf-xaf-te-06-opsdir-telechat-chown-2019-07-22-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ospf-xaf-te
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Telechat Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2019-08-06
Requested 2019-07-12
Authors Anton Smirnov , Alvaro Retana , Michael Barnes
I-D last updated 2019-07-22
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -02 by Ben Niven-Jenkins (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -06 by Ben Niven-Jenkins (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -06 by Roni Even (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Kathleen Moriarty
Opsdir Telechat review of -06 by Tim Chown (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Tim Chown
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-ospf-xaf-te by Ops Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/dp07nNXG3p3ZMAEU5pa3vpkeRlw
Reviewed revision 06 (document currently at 07)
Result Ready
Completed 2019-07-22
review-ietf-ospf-xaf-te-06-opsdir-telechat-chown-2019-07-22-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of
the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included
in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should
treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

The draft, which updates RFC5786, describes the approach of advertising
cross-address family OSPF TE information to support better integrated IPv4/IPv6
MPLS TE LSP infrastructures.

The document is well written and includes a good discussion of the problem
being addressed by the update, and a practical example of its application.

The draft is Ready for publication.