Last Call Review of draft-ietf-p2psip-share-09
review-ietf-p2psip-share-09-secdir-lc-housley-2016-10-20-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-p2psip-share
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2016-10-25
Requested 2016-10-14
Authors Alexander Knauf , Thomas C. Schmidt , Gabriel Hege , Matthias Wählisch
I-D last updated 2017-03-22 (Latest revision 2016-11-13)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -09 by Matthew A. Miller (diff)
Secdir Early review of -08 by Russ Housley (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -09 by Russ Housley (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -09 by Rick Casarez (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Russ Housley
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-p2psip-share by Security Area Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 09 (document currently at 10)
Result Ready
Completed 2016-10-20
review-ietf-p2psip-share-09-secdir-lc-housley-2016-10-20-00
I reviewed this document for the Security Directorate after a request
by the ART AD for an early review.

Version reviewed: draft-ietf-p2psip-share-09


Summary: Ready (from a Security Directorate perspective)

Thank you for addressing the comments that I provided on -08.


Major Concerns:  None


Minor Concerns:  None


Nits:

Section 5.1 says:

   When defining the pattern, care must be taken to avoid conflicts
   arising from two user names of witch one is a substring of the other.

s/witch/which/



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