Last Call Review of draft-ietf-pals-congcons-01
review-ietf-pals-congcons-01-opsdir-lc-dodge-2016-01-11-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-pals-congcons |
|---|---|---|
| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 02) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
| Deadline | 2016-01-05 | |
| Requested | 2015-12-04 | |
| Authors | Yaakov (J) Stein , David L. Black , Bob Briscoe | |
| I-D last updated | 2016-01-11 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -01
by Ron Bonica
(diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -01 by Hilarie Orman (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -01 by Menachem Dodge (diff) Rtgdir Early review of -01 by Keyur Patel (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Menachem Dodge |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-pals-congcons by Ops Directorate Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 01 (document currently at 02) | |
| Result | Has nits | |
| Completed | 2016-01-11 |
review-ietf-pals-congcons-01-opsdir-lc-dodge-2016-01-11-00
Hello,
I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of
the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included
in AD reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should
treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
This intended status of this document is Informational.
This document discusses Pseudowires (PW) under congestion conditions and
whether the PW traffic can harm other traffic. The conclusions are that PWs
transporting responsive traffic behave as desired and don't require additional
mechanisms. For inelastic PWs such as TDM PWS it is proposed that the TDM PW be
shut down when congestion conditions persist and it can no longer deliver
accepatable traffic.
The Nits tool found the following warning:
Outdated reference: A later version (-11) exists of
draft-ietf-tsvwg-circuit-breaker-04
Other than the above, I have no issues with the document.
Thank you kindly,
Menachem Dodge